A Romantic Saturday Evening

Like the last post, this is based on a writing prompt from the book 642 Things to Write About. It’s loosely written in a play format, as it’s from the point of view of a play-by-play announcer and color commentator.


Cast of Characters

Dave Johnson: The play-by-play announcer.
Bob Green: The color commentator.
Lauren: A woman on a romantic date.
Cam: A man on a romantic date.

 

Scene

A romantic restaurant in an average American City.

Time

The present.

ACT I
Scene 1
SETTING: Alleia, a romantic Italian restaurant in downtown Chattanooga, Tennessee. The time is 9:00 p.m.
AT RISE: We see our two announcers, Dave and Bob, standing, facing the audience as if they were looking into a broadcast camera.

 

DAVE

Good evening, everyone! I am Dave Johnson, coming to you live from Alleia in downtown Chattanooga! It’s 9 o’clock-

BOB

On a Saturday, the regular crowd shuffles in…

DAVE

Bob, did you just steal a line from Billy Joel?

BOB

I have no idea what you’re talking about, Dave.

DAVE

As I was saying, I’m Dave Johnson and with me is Bob Green. We are here in downtown Chattanooga, at Alleia, a wonderfully romantic restaurant. It’s a beautiful, warm springtime night outside, and here inside the restaurant, love is in the air! Bob, what can we expect from this crowd tonight?

BOB

Dave, I’ve been watching couples as they come in tonight, and let me tell you, the beautiful people are out this evening, and Dave, when you said “Love is in the air,” you weren’t kidding. There are couples of all ages here tonight – ages 18 to 80! I did notice one particularly young couple as they came in earlier tonight, and let me tell you, that young man looked as nervous as a cat in a room full of rocking chairs. Could we see the lifetime special served up here at Alleia tonight?

DAVE

Alright. Let’s check in on our first couple. We have Mr. and Mrs. Smith. It appears that the waiter has already taken their order and served them bread. Right now, it doesn’t look like Mr. and Mrs. Smith have much to say.

BOB

Dave, from what I can read of Mr. Smith’s body language, his silence doesn’t appear to be out of anger. The look on his face appears to be one of boredom. Almost as if he’s been here before and doesn’t quite know what to say.

(Bob presses his hand to his ear as if he’s trying to hear something in his earpiece.)

What’s that? I understand that we happen to have a microphone at their table tonight. Let’s listen in.

MR. SMITH

(off)

The waiter seems nice. Has he been our waiter before?

MRS. SMITH

(off)

He is nice, although I don’t think he’s been our waiter before.

Hey, did you remember to pay the electric bill?

DAVE

Well, given the nature of that conversation, I don’t think Mr. and Mrs. Smith have managed to catch any of the love that is floating around in the air tonight.

BOB

Dave, what we have here is a classic example of a couple that has been married for, oh, I dunno, I’m guessing somewhere in the neighborhood of 12-14 years. And that neighborhood is still nice, but a little older, run-down, and the houses could use a bit of paint on the outside, and the inside could use some updating, too. Definitely worth updating, though. And, I think I’ve beaten that analogy to death.

(While pointing/drawing at a TV screen in front of him, as if it’s a telestrator.)

One more observation, though. Looking at Mrs. Smith, she has some lines under her eyes, indicating she’s growing tired of dealing with the children, and not enough time for herself.

Also, if you look here at Mr. Smith, you’ll see he has some bags under his eyes. He could travel to India on the bags beneath those eyes. It’s a classic sign of too much stress at work, not enough sleep, and not enough “quality time” with Mrs. Smith if you know what I mean.

DAVE

Bob, I think even a blind man could read between the lines of that statement. Hopefully, the Smiths get some rest and maybe a vacation. A few more years and they should get out of those “ready for the kids to get out of the house” doldrums!

(Pressing his hand to his earpiece)

What’s that? We have something big going on over at table 22, where we have a twenty-something couple, Cam & Lauren. It looks like they have just finished dessert, and Dave has tentatively reached across the table and grabbed Lauren’s hand, and if my lip reading is accurate, it looks like he just said, “I have something I really want to talk to you about.”

BOB

Dave, the hand-grab is an ambiguous move, and we’ll have to see what he does next. I’ve seen that move precede break-ups, but Cam’s body language isn’t signaling that at all. With a break-up, you usually see more of a confidence in body movement, due to the finality of the decision. With the nervousness that is accompanying Cam’s body language, he seems like he is unsure of what may happen…

DAVE

Cam is still speaking to Lauren, and Lauren looks a bit taken aback by what he is saying.

BOB

She does look a little surprised, Dave, but she is smiling. Cam is still looking a little nervous, but he seems happy. Also, I did note while observing them earlier this evening that Cam has checked his pocket several times. Particularly when Lauren excused herself to the ladies’ room earlier. I think that might be a hint of what’s to come.

DAVE

Cam is standing up at the table, reaching into his pocket and stepping over to Lauren’s side of the table. HE’S DROPPING TO ONE KNEE! BOB, HE’S GOING FOR THE BIG QUESTION! Lauren’s eyes have gone wide, and her hand has covered her mouth in a gesture of shock. People in the restaurant have noticed, and it’s gone silent, and all eyes are focused on Cam & Lauren.

BOB

This is the crucial moment! This is where a lot of rookies get nervous, forgetting what they planned to say. From what I can see, the nervousness has faded for Cam, and there is a confident smile on Cam’s face.

DAVE

Cam’s right arm is resting on his leg, holding the ring in its case as he is speaking to Lauren. As you noted, you can definitely see that his confidence is high! Lauren is all smiles, looking into Cam’s eyes as he speaks.

BOB

You can tell by his body language that this is a man who is in love and knows exactly what he wants and is not afraid to go for it. His back is straight, and his voice is strong.

And Lauren: that smile is the most natural of smiles and her eyes, no, her whole face, is overflowing with love. Lauren’s eyes are already saying “Yes,” even though Dave hasn’t actually asked anything yet.

DAVE

Cam is still talking. His arm is coming up. THIS IS IT! HERE HE GOES! HE’S SWINGING FOR THE FENCE! He is holding the ring box up and opening it. I can make out the words “Will you marry me?” coming out of his mouth.

BOB

(Bob pretends to use the telestrator.)

As you can see, here, Cam has a bit of sweat rolling down the side of his face. He’s really put himself out there, though, so you can’t hold that him against him; even the pros get a little nervous on the big plays, but it’s how they focus that nervousness: will they perform or be crushed under pressure? And so far Cam is doing great.

DAVE

Cam has stopped talking. Lauren has taken a moment, and it looks like she’s trying to compose herself.

BOB

And Dave, that pause isn’t going to make Cam feel any better, although, with the look on Lauren’s face, he doesn’t have anything to worry about.

DAVE

Lauren is starting to speak. I can’t quite make out what she’s saying. She’s smiling while she’s talking and let out a little laugh and stopped talking. It looks like she’s trying to pull herself together again, and I see a tear falling from her eyes. She’s opening her mouth to speak…

(Dave pauses for a second, staring intently at the couple)

IT’S A YES! SHE HAS SAID YES!

BOB

WHAT A MOMENT, Dave! She said yes! Let me tell you when she started talking and didn’t say yes right away, I had to wonder what the outcome was going to be. Thankfully for Cam, whatever she said didn’t take long. Suspense like that could have given the poor young man a heart attack!

DAVE

As they say, Bob, “All’s well that ends well.”

Wow! What a wonderful night we have here, people! This room was filled with love before, and the loveometer has gone off the charts. It even looks like our tired married couple, Mr. and Mrs. Smith, have a little more romantic energy between them. Nothing like a good proposal to make for a romantic evening!

Folks, on behalf of our entire production crew here tonight, and especially Cam & Lauren, I’d like to say thanks for joining Bob and me tonight on this historic moment in dating! We got to witness a special moment for two people, and it couldn’t have gone any better. Stay tuned – the post date show is coming up, and our reporter Stacey is expected to have a live interview with Cam & Lauren. From all of us at LoveTV, thank you, and good night!

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